Rerstuf's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sorry]

lmao, can't fool me, I knew it was you, you have an unmistakable artstyle.
Don't feel sorry about this, truth is, it's nice to know you're okay and it's a real joy to see your art again, I doubt anyone is upset about it.
Finally, if you need to talk, come talk alright? Seems like you have a lot going on, and it's just sad seeing you down low, get it out of your system if you need.

[Shrimp Tela]

Not so shrimple now!

[Lee's Mom]

"All I need to do is not think about my mom in a sexy outf-aaaand now the image is stuck in my head."

[The Dungeon of Naheulbeuk]

Now the only missing part is the dwarf profusely swearing at the elf, and that's even before he got hit by her terrible marksmanship.

[Fixed gods biggest mistake]

"It's just a bug with the identification app" is what a spider would say.

[This is who she really is]

For a second I thought she was confiscating the phone, pretty funny tho

[acceptance]

I noticed you asked for a critic on the forum so I'll give my own short one:

Composition is fine for the most part. Space, rhythm, variety, lines, etc... are fine, really like how the tree sorta surround your characters in a way.

The biggest problem I'm seeing with your art is that the character on the left gets drowned by the background and you miss important details as a result because the eyes get pushed to the right, and I think the culprit is the colors.

To be clear, I think it's a really good choice of colors, works pretty well together, hint of red breaking the blue-greenish tones is a nice touch, but the problem mostly comes with the colors of character on the left, her wings and hair color are too close the blue tone of the background and any sort of focus is lost. I didn't realized they were the same characters until I noticed the dress hidden underneath the wing.

That being said, even if you don't notice that the characters are meant to be the same, the spectator should get the general idea you were trying to convey nonetheless.
So overall, it's pretty good.

And on a personal note, bird girl so that's a plus for me.

Oddlem responds:

thank you so much for giving me some critique!!! you make some good points, I definitely could've made the REAL bird girl stand out more. I think some other people got confused because of it 🤔 and it makes sense that was why!

tysm for taking the time to write this out, it definitely opened my eyes a lil!

[Tela poses]

It's pretty cute. I imaginer her being like 1 feet tall when she tells you to fear her.

And if you stick the needle up her butt you get a plushsicle.